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NiikuRai
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Need comment on my new layout
« on: February 11, 2008, 03:00:36 AM »

http://www.imagehustler.com/0208/1202715906.png

Well , I've just designed a new div layout ,
And I really need some comments or critics on it .
Yea , especially on the text , I only have few fonts in my computer , bad texter here =X
Honestly I'm kinda sick with the colors , don't know why I picked it tho .


Any ideas on how to improve it ?
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Re: Need comment on my new layout
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2008, 05:09:10 PM »

The font fits the feel of the layout, but the colors do seem problematic.  The headers are brighter than the banner, so the eye does tend to be drawn to them.  Also, the walls of the navigation and content areas are too light, so they're hard to see.

Recommendations: bring out more color into the banner, maybe by placing a layer over the picture and using color burn.  For the content and navigation, make the yellow walls brighter and the background colors for those areas distinct from the background of the entire layout.  Also, try typing some words and links into the layout to view the  design in its full use, it could help you visualize what more you could improve with it.
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Re: Need comment on my new layout
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2008, 02:01:49 AM »

for one thing, u did bring out the soft feeling that's consistent throughout the whole layout Smiley

i agree with NiikuRai that the header's a bit too attention-grabbing. either tone the colors of it down or draw more attention to your bg image of BoA by increasing the opacity. i dont really think the yellow bars that divide your content from your RHS navigation is necessary =) might look better without them.
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Re: Need comment on my new layout
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2008, 01:02:54 PM »

I think the yellow lines are decreasing the beauty of your layout. Removing or changing the yellow lines will be a wise choice, you should make the BoA image more outstanding because it will be the main spot of your layout. The first thing people see from a website is the image of the layout.
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