[:: Frozen Words ::]

[Frozen]

Well, of course I have to create a topic in here aswell :P

The Pale Horse:

Love and Serenity turn to black ashes
Waves of Sadness drown my rapture
Sights of mayhem and destruction
Melancholy my heart does capture

Sounds of praises, alleluias
Who'd have though I'd lose my faith?
I feel this Pale Horse close to me
His eyes of fire, his wraith-like face

And there he keeps me
red tears of blood
Roll from my eyelids, off my cheeks
to die within the squalid mud

He's in my body
Each space he fills
My heart now is dying
My soul he kills

He feasts upon me
His hunger waning
But his cunning strong
He still is playing

And now you see
Why my eyes are dulled
My expression weary
My actions pulled

He is me
and I am him
He is evil
and I am sin

I find myself
in an early casket
His hold on me
Everlasting...

Yet do I fight it?
His grip like ice?
I kind of like
this sacrifice...

[Frozen]

The Devils Prayers:


Don?t go quietly into the beckoning of the night,
Rage, rage, rage against the dying of the light,
Fight the angel,
Curse the saint,
Praise the picture lacking paint,

The pain,
The anguish,
The loss of hope,
Ignore it all to scream to cope,
Block out the pain,
Block out the tears,
Hand him a beer call out for cheers,

When lords of lust and loathing call,
Dare not avert thine eyes to fall,
A bone hand sheathed in a black cloak,
Curls to the beat of your clever joke,
The pull, the sink, the fading heart,
It turns, and tears, falling apart.

The lark is to trees,
As the shark is to seas,
The proportion unwinds with a matter of ease,
The equation is set,
With hardly a fret,
Jaws of bone crush the song of regret,

Our deliverance from evil,
Laid over in Phoenix,
The forgiveness of our sins,
Out on a break,
For thine is the kingdom,
The power,
The glory,
Forever and ever,
Amen.

[Michelle]

*claps* I love your work, its awesome.

[franco]

Amazing. You're good with words ^^

[animeallen]

wow!
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*speachless*

[Jelanda]

Simply amazing!

[Frozen]

Thank you all !!! I got another one!

Gaia

Architectural majesty
Flailing, forced to bended knee
Satan?s skyline dark with dust
Concrete carcass rots in rust
Rocks cascading, crater pops
Jigsaw tossed, misshapen blocks
Girders twisted, spiral canes
Soft as solder, shrapnel rains.
Tips of fingers, skinned and raw
Bare hands dig like canine paw
Peeling nails and throb of veins
Slicks of sweat and postponed pains
Bent backs break in frantic pace
Crumbled bones as discs displace
Graves of gravel, souls exhumed
Bodies bent in makeshift tombs
Ladders snap with fragile rungs
Debris pebble-dashes lungs
Rescue hats like bobbing ducks
Voices mouthing ?what the f***?
Shoulders drop, frustrated wails
Knuckled fists as mission fails
Muscles torn and hearts in shreds
Furrowed brows and shaking heads
Morgue of many, view from hell
Inward screams and choking yell.

Blindness


Tick tock
Drip drop
Spiral and spin
Unleash what's caged within
Thick red
As it drips from the head
Slip from the vein
The only illusion is pain
Skin kissed by silver moonlight
Waiting to rise till the fall of midnight
Sway and dance
In the death you'll find the romance
Circle the fallen
For the reaper has come calling
In the last kiss
You'll find the first in hazed bliss
Frozen cold
Who ever lives to grow old
Life is a vision
Looked upon with contempt and derision
Breath is a ploy
Those who carry it serve as toys
Heat is unknown
To you I give a perfect rose
In a garden of ice grown
Standing alone
She is a raven the coop has flown
May you drown in your ignorance
Blind to your last chance

(I fell "blindness" was a bad title =.= )

[Melfina]

That last one has a lot of rhyme O.o it's like if it was a song! very cool!

[Frozen]

Thx ^_^
Its one of my few with lotsa rhyme... This one has some of it aswell:

When darkness falls,
The demons come,
Creatures of the night,
Find their way to your home,
To steal your soul,
To torture your mind,
To drive you insane,
They find it divine.
Clawing your back,
Ripping you hair,
Emotionally damaging you,
Beyond anyones repair,
Life becomes fear,
Fear the main part of life,
When no one's around,
You scream and cry in strife.
You slip into darkness,
Never to return,
The demons run your life,
The creatures of the night,
Completely in control,
Nothing left to do,
But pray endlessly for the light,
You know it will never come,
So you slowly die,
In the darkness and in fright.

And this one... is probably my all time favorite:

Life or Death


Death

I hear the evil laughter of Death drawing near
The heat from the yellow flames sure does sear
this sadness in my soul is like a leaded heart
as it realizes it is from my life I did part

But it is not the angels that I had hoped to see
floating on weightless clouds right next to me
Instead it is demons that I see everywhere
Their red glowing eyes locked in a stare

The fire it burns as it engulfs me all around
But I am deafened by the endless loss of sound
The wind picks up sending the flames into a rage
I feel as if I am imprisoned in a glass cage

One breath escaped will surely shatter
this mere existence in Hell into matter
This is a nightmare I have envisioned since a child
It was wrong to succumb to the selfishness and to be wild

But now my life is over and this pain does hurt
I guess this time the accident I did not skirt
The Devil's smile of evil is cloaked as if wrapped in a cape
and I know now that for me there will never be an escape.


Life

Life is envisioned and what you make it out to be
In time that understanding is what you will see
Be rid of the selfishness, greed and no longer be lost
Set free worries of demons, death, Hell at any cost

Life is free and full of laughter ringing in the air
No hurt or sadness will penetrate my heart if I care
The only fire in my life that I wish to see
Is the light of the candle burning next to me

The flame is that reflected from the golden yellow hue of the sun
The angels peering through the clouds let me know I'm the chosen one.
Our world is as serene as the sanctity of the cape
feeling the wind in my face is a wonderful escape

The ocean is crystal clear like rippling glass
Letting me know it is he that has class
My soul is as free as that of a child
I feel so peaceful no longer beguiled

I can see the sun setting, a red orb off in the distance
I can feel the pull of this life and I hold no resistance
I sit on a rock feeling all the innocence around
Knowing now that in life happiness can be found!

[Aya_14]

Gawd! You're so talanted.. haha.. I think i'm ur fan.. :P lolx :P keep it up :P

ur simply amazing.. lolx :P

[mandi]

Wow, your poetry is so...deep   I'm not a big poetry person, but those sent shivers down my back ^_^

[xxGlaepixezxx]

*Stares*.................Gawd...you are SOOO GOOD! It must take you ages to do it! I am soo proud of you:cry: ! Keep your talented work up! Seriously you kick butt  :wink: :D Grrrr..............Im jelouse! *Ahm...can't spell ^.^;*....Lol, jks...Wish you luck in your poetic career!

[P.s, your poetry sounded pretty sad....are you having difficullties in your life? If you are, we're always here to give you advice since we can't b where you are! ^.^]

[The Wizzard]

You are very good with words and sounding elegent and having a touching meaning but some times you loose the rythm of the poem. Over all great poems you must be very talented, keep it up!^^ :D    :P  :wink:

[Missy9]

Well...I alwyas knew that my poems sucked, and these poems prove it. Don't get me wrong, they're wonderful :D.They're like a D&G dress, so beautiful that you get intimidated at the thought of trying one on. (I get bored between commercials so I sorta watch fashion tv sometimes :lol: )

[nanashi41]

You rock man!!!!!! Wanna praise yah!!  :shock:
The words are very deep...and most of them i don't really understand.
But it's...Amazing! Good job... :D